It was good yall. And I usually dont like reluctant and avoident MCs but I actually got it here. Realistically, MC was in a bad position both in the past and present. Its easy to say confess everything and fight together, but even ML at that point was still in college and dependent upon his family. Tell him and then what? Not get the money? Get threats abt his bro? MC is sober and lives realistically. Then they met in the present, the huge power gap and the memory loss makes it even harder to speak up. Telling it might even make things worse(after all he was masquerading as a girl and he thought ML was into him as a girl). Its only after resolving that telling it would be better for ML(after knowing abt the suicide attempt) that he does so. But even then, he was putting his and his brother lives on the line for romance(the dad, the bro, and the sis were all putting pressure on him! This ultra powerful and rich family were all using both physical threats and emotional blackmail to make sure he knew his place). If i was in MC place, could I do better? I doubt it. Risking me and my family for a man sounds good in a romance novel, not so good set in reality.
Thankfully ML never gave up and really really loved him. Its sad ML kept getting hurt emotionally, but the key here is only emotional hurt(dealt by MC personally, not other things). MC would have been hurt emotionally, physically, money wise, his bros future etc if they stayed together. Its just way more imbalanced. Rather than saying MC hurt ML, its better to pull out the root cause. Like the ML sis said, ML own family hurt him. The dad forced the deception(both abt the grandpa and later MC death), ML bro threated the MC bro, and ML sis used emotional blackmail. MC would've been told ML and gotten together with ML if it wasnt for ML family. They are the true villains of this story.
I did want more extras and to explore future life together more. But it was good and emotional how it was. The dialogue was very natural, flowed well. The drawings were so good! I liked both MC and ML. It moved me alot. 5/5.
It was good yall. And I usually dont like reluctant and avoident MCs but I actually got it here. Realistically, MC was in a bad position both in the past and present. Its easy to say confess everything and fight together, but even ML at that point was still in college and dependent upon his family. Tell him and then what? Not get the money? Get threats abt his bro? MC is sober and lives realistically. Then they met in the present, the huge power gap and the memory loss makes it even harder to speak up. Telling it might even make things worse(after all he was masquerading as a girl and he thought ML was into him as a girl). Its only after resolving that telling it would be better for ML(after knowing abt the suicide attempt) that he does so. But even then, he was putting his and his brother lives on the line for romance(the dad, the bro, and the sis were all putting pressure on him! This ultra powerful and rich family were all using both physical threats and emotional blackmail to make sure he knew his place). If i was in MC place, could I do better? I doubt it. Risking me and my family for a man sounds good in a romance novel, not so good set in reality.
Thankfully ML never gave up and really really loved him. Its sad ML kept getting hurt emotionally, but the key here is only emotional hurt(dealt by MC personally, not other things). MC would have been hurt emotionally, physically, money wise, his bros future etc if they stayed together. Its just way more imbalanced. Rather than saying MC hurt ML, its better to pull out the root cause. Like the ML sis said, ML own family hurt him. The dad forced the deception(both abt the grandpa and later MC death), ML bro threated the MC bro, and ML sis used emotional blackmail. MC would've been told ML and gotten together with ML if it wasnt for ML family. They are the true villains of this story.
I did want more extras and to explore future life together more. But it was good and emotional how it was. The dialogue was very natural, flowed well. The drawings were so good! I liked both MC and ML. It moved me alot. 5/5.