First chapter into it, before what I suspect comes a Flashback so we get to see How-They-got-To-this-point, which is frustrating way to write stories and movies now a days. Anyway, first chapter into it, we see a woman happy to divorce and a man taking poison to keep her home.... What is up with this moronically childish and self-serving ML? DOESN'T HE HAVE A FREAKING MOUTH? ヽ(`Д´)ﾉ I see this a LOT lately. Stories where the Plot revolves around the fact that ML AND FL MUST NOT HAVE A MOUTH BECAUSE EVERYTHING CAN LITERALLY BE RESOLVED WITH WORDS AND SOUNDS! ヽ(`Д´)ﾉ
The look in this mls eyes before he suddenly collapsed from poison... Childish. He's a grown man for goodness sake! Communicate! ARe these stories written by dramatic teenagers?? ヽ(`Д´)ﾉ
First chapter into it, before what I suspect comes a Flashback so we get to see How-They-got-To-this-point, which is frustrating way to write stories and movies now a days. Anyway, first chapter into it, we see a woman happy to divorce and a man taking poison to keep her home.... What is up with this moronically childish and self-serving ML? DOESN'T HE HAVE A FREAKING MOUTH? ヽ(`Д´)ﾉ
I see this a LOT lately. Stories where the Plot revolves around the fact that ML AND FL MUST NOT HAVE A MOUTH BECAUSE EVERYTHING CAN LITERALLY BE RESOLVED WITH WORDS AND SOUNDS! ヽ(`Д´)ﾉ
The look in this mls eyes before he suddenly collapsed from poison... Childish. He's a grown man for goodness sake! Communicate! ARe these stories written by dramatic teenagers?? ヽ(`Д´)ﾉ
I needed this rant... ┗( T﹏T )┛