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First chapter into it, before what I suspect comes a Flashback so we get to see How-They-got-To-this-point, which is frustrating way to write stories and movies now a days. Anyway, first chapter into it, we see a woman happy to divorce and a man taking poison to keep her home.... What is up with this moronically childish and self-serving ML? DOESN'T HE HAVE A FREAKING MOUTH? ヽ(`Д´)ﾉ
I see this a LOT lately. Stories where the Plot revolves around the fact that ML AND FL MUST NOT HAVE A MOUTH BECAUSE EVERYTHING CAN LITERALLY BE RESOLVED WITH WORDS AND SOUNDS! ヽ(`Д´)ﾉ
The look in this mls eyes before he suddenly collapsed from poison... Childish. He's a grown man for goodness sake! Communicate! ARe these stories written by dramatic teenagers?? ヽ(`Д´)ﾉ
I needed this rant... ┗( T﹏T )┛
Finally he confessed, finally they kissed! But, if next chapter they don't take it to the next step and she draws back, imma quit this! It's too much work just to read this!