It's like something is missing between 5 and 6, and then we have chapter 6 and 7 which is the same chapter. Lol.
I thought this story was a story about a mother who ended up debuting instead of her actual child, as the title leads to, but it's not even close. It's magic and goddesses and gamer screens, and .. That's not the kind of story I wanted to read right now. FL is ridiculous and I feel like I wasted my time with the first chapter, in pure confusion. The Summary is Not very well written either.
Literally the more I read this, the more I understand the ending. Even her professor, her supposed fiance who claims he loves her, doesn't even try to protect her from people. No one is on her side. Tormented left and right, I'm actually shocked that she doesn't just disappear into her adventurer alter-ego and leaves the kingdom in secrets and shadows.
Mildly Alarming. This girl... this world they're in. Seems like herbivores have no free will at all when a carnivore sets their sights on them. This girl will never escape.
Finally he confessed, finally they kissed! But, if next chapter they don't take it to the next step and she draws back, imma quit this! It's too much work just to read this!
First chapter into it, before what I suspect comes a Flashback so we get to see How-They-got-To-this-point, which is frustrating way to write stories and movies now a days. Anyway, first chapter into it, we see a woman happy to divorce and a man taking poison to keep her home.... What is up with this moronically childish and self-serving ML? DOESN'T HE HAVE A FREAKING MOUTH? ヽ(`Д´)ﾉ
I see this a LOT lately. Stories where the Plot revolves around the fact that ML AND FL MUST NOT HAVE A MOUTH BECAUSE EVERYTHING CAN LITERALLY BE RESOLVED WITH WORDS AND SOUNDS! ヽ(`Д´)ﾉ
The look in this mls eyes before he suddenly collapsed from poison... Childish. He's a grown man for goodness sake! Communicate! ARe these stories written by dramatic teenagers?? ヽ(`Д´)ﾉ
I needed this rant... ┗( T﹏T )┛
It's all over the place this story. From the Scenes that change in a heartbeat, I often feel like I'm missing a few pages. The translation too is so messy. It's not good.
2 chapters in, and the plot has already been resolved. Lol. is the rest of the story going to be how they ended up together then? cause that sounds absolutely boring when the first chapter concluded the whole plot.
Already a few pages in, you see clear signs of AI Generation. I don't mind that, but when they make mistakes like this, it's super cringe. The Beastkin, or whatever they call them in this work, have 2 sets of ears. Human ears and beast ears, which is absolutely ridiculous and a frequent mistake that Ai Generated work commits. （￣へ￣）
The translations of this story is bewildering. It's so 19th century(⊙…⊙ ), so old and out dated. Who translated this?? (￣∇￣")
I can't even call this a story, it's that bad. The pacing is out of this world, the characters are so overly dramatic it doesn't even feel like they're real - and for a reader, that feeling is important. It's hard to describe how truly awful the sensations of this thing gives as a reader, and I will recommend to drop it like a hot rock. (︶︿︶)＝凸
The plot feels like it's all over the place and every new chapter a new thing is revealed like the creator had no guidelines and just makes it up as they go along.
The Art doesn't match the art of the Logo/front page, so that's pretty misleading. Actually they all look like 12 year olds at the cusp of losing their baby fat, so it's pretty off-putting to read.
The Translations are absolutely awful, urg. I can barely understand what's going on.
Absolutely gorgeous art, though I gotta admit I've no idea what age they are. They all look about 14, but I don't believe they are. The Plot though, is a little messy- and more or less ruined by the bad translation. So, it's definitely work keeping on a watch for a better translation.
If She doesn't End up with her Teacher, I am RAGE Quitting this! They are super adorable together! Sure the prince is cute and probably regrets his past life and so on, BUT the past is the PAST.
It's not like I dislike her behavior, but she's certainly not being guarded at all. She just transmigrated, or woke up her memories, and she's being... a little too excitable. There's no restraint in her words and actions(specially since she's still injured). She seems to have cunning and observation skills, yet she doesn't tread lightly. Such strange behavior isn't explained to people around her, and she's in general not being careful of her sudden change. She doesn't behave like a person who's been through hell, sickness and betrayal. I know people don't react all the same, but still, being cautious when you're in alien enviroments is just sensible.