First chapter into it, before what I suspect comes a Flashback so we get to see How-They-got-To-this-point, which is frustrating way to write stories and movies now a days. Anyway, first chapter into it, we see a woman happy to divorce and a man taking poison to keep her home.... What is up with this moronically childish and self-serving ML? DOESN'T HE HAVE A FREAKING MOUTH? ヽ(`Д´)ノ
I see this a LOT lately. Stories where the Plot revolves around the fact that ML AND FL MUST NOT HAVE A MOUTH BECAUSE EVERYTHING CAN LITERALLY BE RESOLVED WITH WORDS AND SOUNDS! ヽ(`Д´)ノ
The look in this mls eyes before he suddenly collapsed from poison... Childish. He's a grown man for goodness sake! Communicate! ARe these stories written by dramatic teenagers?? ヽ(`Д´)ノ
I needed this rant... ┗( T﹏T )┛
Already a few pages in, you see clear signs of AI Generation. I don't mind that, but when they make mistakes like this, it's super cringe. The Beastkin, or whatever they call them in this work, have 2 sets of ears. Human ears and beast ears, which is absolutely ridiculous and a frequent mistake that Ai Generated work commits. ( ̄へ ̄)
what do you mean years before I was born? Manga was barely even invented back then, and no, drawing human ears and animal ears at the same time is not normal even with manga, and is a fairly new phenomenon. Because artists with even a shred of self-respect and minimal drawing education, knows how to draw simple anatomy and would never mess up such a rookie mistake. It's the new artists that keep doing this, and it's lazy. As I said, No self-respecting artists would do that. Get Real. ┑( ̄Д  ̄)┍
Please do some research before making these kinds of statements. Manga was far from "Barely invented" when you were born, works like Astro Boy were already being published in 1952.
As for beastkin having human ears, a simple search will find art forum discussions from over a decade ago debating whether kemonomimi (The Japanese term for animal-eared characters) should have two or four ears. This isn't a new concept. There are also published manga from before 2000s, such as Hyper Police(1993), that depict characters with both human and animal ears.
Whether a character has two or four ears is purely an artistic preference, not an indicator of an artist's skill or the level of effort they have put into their work. Neither choice is inherently wrong, and many artists intentionally leave it ambiguous by styling the character's hair to cover the sides of the head.
As for AI, I agree that generative AI can and does produce anatomical inconsistencies. However, four eared beastkin existed for decades before generative AI became mainstream. Their presence alone cannot serve as evidence of AI usage. If ear placement is intentional and consistent across multiple panels or illustrations, then it is simply a stylistic design choice, not a reliable indicator of AI-generated art.
I can't even call this a story, it's that bad. The pacing is out of this world, the characters are so overly dramatic it doesn't even feel like they're real - and for a reader, that feeling is important. It's hard to describe how truly awful the sensations of this thing gives as a reader, and I will recommend to drop it like a hot rock. (︶︿︶)=凸











Finally he confessed, finally they kissed! But, if next chapter they don't take it to the next step and she draws back, imma quit this! It's too much work just to read this!