The art definitely got better from the first chapter to the end but ohmagad the eyes... they look like crossed eyed fish eyes. The art is so good otherwise. How can the artist be so good at everything else but can't learn how to draw an eye?
Body? Tea. Side profile? Mogs. Front facing eyes? Chopped.
I could go on and on, I just can't get over it . One sec ur admiring the face cards, and then the next panel is uncanny valley on max. When the characters look anywhere but the front, the eyes look good, it's just when they're drawn looking forward, which you would think is the easiest way to draw them. Like bro, just look in the mirror . The MC is especially bad. Bro is supposed to look ethereal but he ends up looking like yassified derpy hooves from MLP .
Story wise, it was pretty cute. The MC constantly calling the ML an old man when they were getting frisky was kind of off putting though.
It did end abruptly and the pacing was kind of off, but hopefully the side stories make up for it. Hoping the authors health gets better ^_^
The art definitely got better from the first chapter to the end but ohmagad the eyes... they look like crossed eyed fish eyes. The art is so good otherwise. How can the artist be so good at everything else but can't learn how to draw an eye?
Body? Tea. Side profile? Mogs. Front facing eyes? Chopped.
I could go on and on, I just can't get over it . One sec ur admiring the face cards, and then the next panel is uncanny valley on max. When the characters look anywhere but the front, the eyes look good, it's just when they're drawn looking forward, which you would think is the easiest way to draw them. Like bro, just look in the mirror . The MC is especially bad. Bro is supposed to look ethereal but he ends up looking like yassified derpy hooves from MLP .
Story wise, it was pretty cute. The MC constantly calling the ML an old man when they were getting frisky was kind of off putting though.
It did end abruptly and the pacing was kind of off, but hopefully the side stories make up for it. Hoping the authors health gets better ^_^