on one hand it’s cool that this time loop is actually fleshed out with the divine artifact, and the “twist” was decent as bodyguard 2nd MLs def give incel vibes.. ofc he’d trap her in a loop of death where she’d have no choice but to choose him.. and yet still FAIL. （/TДT)/ buuut on the other hand, bc this story is going at mach 10, little details are forgotten and the emotional notes are kinda muted.. like the fact that bc she turned back time for the ML her cousin prob got beaten to death on the street bc she didn’t go rescue him. be so fr. also, why tf is she shocked about the ML changing after she WENT OUT OF HER WAY to prevent his childhood traumas? there’s no return policy for cinnamon rolls, she’s stuck with him.. but maybe he’ll surface sometimes and it’ll be a dr. jekyll and mr. hyde type thing.(￣∇￣")
on one hand it’s cool that this time loop is actually fleshed out with the divine artifact, and the “twist” was decent as bodyguard 2nd MLs def give incel vibes.. ofc he’d trap her in a loop of death where she’d have no choice but to choose him.. and yet still FAIL. （/TДT)/
buuut on the other hand, bc this story is going at mach 10, little details are forgotten and the emotional notes are kinda muted.. like the fact that bc she turned back time for the ML her cousin prob got beaten to death on the street bc she didn’t go rescue him. be so fr. also, why tf is she shocked about the ML changing after she WENT OUT OF HER WAY to prevent his childhood traumas? there’s no return policy for cinnamon rolls, she’s stuck with him.. but maybe he’ll surface sometimes and it’ll be a dr. jekyll and mr. hyde type thing.(￣∇￣")