I'm reading fragments but the trope so solid it's making sense

I'm like trying to spread a tight hole apart digging chocolate and trying to figure out the contents imagining the missing in betweens in the story that would actually help it more coherent, that's literally how I'm reading this shit right now

If this has a novel, trust it'll be 9999% more clear because he yearns that much more and that's all you need to move this story

I highkey was like wait.. it's kinda starting good reading first chap and it abruptly rushed itself like you sped jerking off 10x so you didn't feel pleasure or ejaculating, you just sit there blank stare and go huh before trying again to get the same result (trust I know what I'm talking about, totally not out of my ass ong)

Gave focus, goal, the problem, but not the beginning, middle, yet starting at the end is what it's giving me, I feel like I'm reading side story 1 labeled 'bae pov' so that we follow story through bae over golden retriever

Pls someone tell me I didn't smoke cope or some shit, does this make sense