The plot was good. But I don’t understand the badum badum of 10 years kids, on top of this, one of this 10 years is actually at least 17 years in mental age, why would she have badum badum for 10 years old kid? I don’t understand what type of authors write this type of flow. Believe me it could have been better without this and also almost all the character’s logical apprehensions seem to be below average. Way to ruin good plot with immature write up, you can say
The plot was good. But I don’t understand the badum badum of 10 years kids, on top of this, one of this 10 years is actually at least 17 years in mental age, why would she have badum badum for 10 years old kid? I don’t understand what type of authors write this type of flow. Believe me it could have been better without this and also almost all the character’s logical apprehensions seem to be below average. Way to ruin good plot with immature write up, you can say