It's a good story, don't let people tell you it's not. It's a good plot, albeit a touch typical but the chase arch was soooooo good. Omega had a backbone which is incredibly refreshing. The ML though, he had what, like 3 jobs? Lol One of which was a doctor intern??? That alone would keep him so incredibly slammed. He just got to waste time like it was nothing. Also he was supposed to be incredibly terminally ill, but that just sort of got glossed over. Like I said, a bit nonsensical. He was whatever he needed to be in each moment. Tbh, other than the initial assault, the other ML honestly wasn't much of a bad person. I actually felt bad for him as his father has clearly always been abusive over tiny things that he couldn't really have any control over (ie, the real ML showing up to a party or not). Idk, I couldn't bring myself to really hate him. (Author, you also forgot his tattoo a lot at the end)
It's a good story, don't let people tell you it's not. It's a good plot, albeit a touch typical but the chase arch was soooooo good. Omega had a backbone which is incredibly refreshing.
The ML though, he had what, like 3 jobs? Lol One of which was a doctor intern??? That alone would keep him so incredibly slammed. He just got to waste time like it was nothing. Also he was supposed to be incredibly terminally ill, but that just sort of got glossed over. Like I said, a bit nonsensical. He was whatever he needed to be in each moment.
Tbh, other than the initial assault, the other ML honestly wasn't much of a bad person. I actually felt bad for him as his father has clearly always been abusive over tiny things that he couldn't really have any control over (ie, the real ML showing up to a party or not). Idk, I couldn't bring myself to really hate him. (Author, you also forgot his tattoo a lot at the end)