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Gang don't slime me out but can the author please write better dialogue I'm on chapter 20,...

Choo choo August 6, 2026 3:06 pm

Gang don't slime me out but can the author please write better dialogue I'm on chapter 20, why is every line of dirty talk about 1. Pretty face 2. Young kid 3. Inexperience with sex

everytime MC says shit like "heh...you're just 21..!" Or "wow, you're so inexperienced" and "you live under my house, my rules" my BROTHER you CAN'T be saying you see him as a kid and also fuxking him and also exerting control over him ML, who u see as a kid, comes from a drug gang and has no where to go

I get the power bottom character the author tryna make (I'm into that too bro trust me) but MC sound like a groomer in these cursed dialogues games gone ill still be here next week

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    Choo choo August 6, 2026 3:21 pm

    Wait I'm on Chap 26 MC looks fine asfreak so it's okay, i'll ignore the 20th time he's brought up ahem *deepens voice* "heh, i'm into pretty faces like yours, brat "

    ymeeen August 6, 2026 3:58 pm

    Yeah fr thats just really disgusting cuz wym u see him as a kid and still fucking him