It’s start good and could have really been interesting the arts is really beautiful they...

It’s start good and could have really been interesting the arts is really beautiful they are both really good looking I could have past the raped but is really detailed like a normal scene. Evon lake is a knight so I was hoping some character like him fighting back and keeping is pride. Like he was the sword man of the king so he should be intelligent like strategic but he just let everyone step on him. I’m really sad because it could have been really dark speaking about interesting topic (the scene when he say that he thought « the blood of the king would be gold but it’s just red like h’es blood » was really interesting showing about the inequality and the elitism of this world). Also it could have been a manipulation game between the top and the bottom like evon is trying to have is knight status back and marsagard to have the crown but can’t be with a woman. And also evon is really sexualised in some positions for nothing like I know it’s a yaoi but I would like that the author do not sexualised someone when they are litteraly at the point of being hang. For finish I think people are going to like it but not for me waste of potential