Idk what’s going on anymore. It reads like chaotic, disjointed, and sloppy writing. This was so anticlimactic, too. The “climax” happened in like 4 chapters over-saturated with filler content in between the action, so the climax feels like one chapter instead. And then that last chapter??? Bro is balling his eyes out and they’re like push the button to save us. If this is supposed to be a monumental character growth moment, it’s so lacking. Like i guess it could be “push the button to prove you want to live” but it’s such dog shit writing it doesn’t hit emotionally. I had such high expectations at the beginning of this story but then it got to the midway point and completely lost any sense of cohesion, it became confusing.
Idk what’s going on anymore. It reads like chaotic, disjointed, and sloppy writing. This was so anticlimactic, too. The “climax” happened in like 4 chapters over-saturated with filler content in between the action, so the climax feels like one chapter instead. And then that last chapter??? Bro is balling his eyes out and they’re like push the button to save us. If this is supposed to be a monumental character growth moment, it’s so lacking. Like i guess it could be “push the button to prove you want to live” but it’s such dog shit writing it doesn’t hit emotionally. I had such high expectations at the beginning of this story but then it got to the midway point and completely lost any sense of cohesion, it became confusing.