okayyyyy it was good, def fast paced but i like that it was short and sweet! wish the horror was more extreme though. the third person was there so briefly that it didn’t feel enough to build connection with him, to me it’s like … thanks for helping them get together ig LMFAO this has a lot more potential to be fleshed out until at least 50 chapters for sure
okayyyyy it was good, def fast paced but i like that it was short and sweet! wish the horror was more extreme though. the third person was there so briefly that it didn’t feel enough to build connection with him, to me it’s like … thanks for helping them get together ig LMFAO this has a lot more potential to be fleshed out until at least 50 chapters for sure