Honestly would have liked it more if there was more tension, if griz didn’t know he was twilight. Everything just felt too easy, you have one moment the mc talking about how griz looks like a Hunter looking at his prey when he was twilight and then the next thing you know griz just confesses that he knows towa is twilight and that he's loved him all that time and it's like is that it? You have the mc wondering about his own feelings of whether or not he even really like griz now of if it’s all just old feelings he couldn’t let go of but then he's being lovey dovey with him. It's just feels so half hearted, either be angsty or sweet and if it'd both do well in both cuz the unsatisfying angst stuff makes the fluffy stuff feel so unearned But that’s just me
Honestly would have liked it more if there was more tension, if griz didn’t know he was twilight. Everything just felt too easy, you have one moment the mc talking about how griz looks like a Hunter looking at his prey when he was twilight and then the next thing you know griz just confesses that he knows towa is twilight and that he's loved him all that time and it's like is that it?
You have the mc wondering about his own feelings of whether or not he even really like griz now of if it’s all just old feelings he couldn’t let go of but then he's being lovey dovey with him.
It's just feels so half hearted, either be angsty or sweet and if it'd both do well in both cuz the unsatisfying angst stuff makes the fluffy stuff feel so unearned
But that’s just me