dropped/ch43 boring as hell but.....art is nice, mains and support cast are likeable but it repeats same stuff over n over, most is thought narrative to read. Not a fan of this type of writing style. I feel it is a story being told to me, it has more narrative than interactive style creativity between characters. There is no real convo or real communication between them at all...and the smut is stupid overkill, which I usually love but in this the ML is selfish as shit so and is abusing him over and over and honestly this could have been maybe 30-40 chaps and done....I can't even imagine dragging this story out to 90 chaps, I don't have the will to bother going forward...just me on this one, simply don't like it.
dropped/ch43 boring as hell but.....art is nice, mains and support cast are likeable but it repeats same stuff over n over, most is thought narrative to read. Not a fan of this type of writing style. I feel it is a story being told to me, it has more narrative than interactive style creativity between characters. There is no real convo or real communication between them at all...and the smut is stupid overkill, which I usually love but in this the ML is selfish as shit so and is abusing him over and over and honestly this could have been maybe 30-40 chaps and done....I can't even imagine dragging this story out to 90 chaps, I don't have the will to bother going forward...just me on this one, simply don't like it.