me lamba or something wrong w this, i just cant point out wat it is like,,,

The writing seems novice level to me. They don't seem comfortable with more characters or settings so the entire story is limited almost entirely to 2 characters and a single apartment. They author also was doing an incredibly slow burn to sex, didn't really seem to know hot to get there, and so just jumped to it in a somewhat personality breaking way.
The story telling is just a bit too narrow