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had a **really nice premise** going.
I agree with @Night_NightSerenity it's basically unseasoned chicken lol
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had a **really nice premise** going.
I agree with @Night_NightSerenity it's basically unseasoned chicken lol
Lol its like trying to speed run every family found tropes it can fit in the story. The art is beautiful but the execution is so fast paced that it doesn't give readers time to immerse in the story. It just tries to take shortcuts out of every 'difficult' situation/plot twist that (plot armourmaxxing) obviously will turn out advantageous to the FL but it doesn't even try to show some struggling or planning that it makes it look like generic story. imo its just lazy writing on the author's part that doesn't give the story justice which is a huge bummer cause it had a ready nice plot going ┑(￣Д ￣)┍ the art is pretty tho I like the character designs sm but I'm sad that they didn't give the characters much depth and instead made them look like shallow doting uncs/aunt.
Don’t get me wrong I like dem generic ass rofan stories where u can turn ur brain off while reading but this one is just so... meh. Wasted potential fr（￣へ￣）