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Although, I get why there are multiple convos arising from how differently people understood this story but for me, the way it was delivered and how the emotions we're portrayed was a bit wonky idk ╮(￣▽￣)╭ i really like that the story touched on the parts that usually gets glossed over by many omegaverse stories but it didn't devle on it deep enough that it fails (for me) to deliver the emotions and message that its trying to convey especially when the story tries to get onto those serious exchange between the characters. Like I also wanna take it seriously but theres like a cute lofi music playing at the back of my mind while reading it LOL its too fuffy for any drama.
Lol its like trying to speed run every family found tropes it can fit in the story. The art is beautiful but the execution is so fast paced that it doesn't give readers time to immerse in the story. It just tries to take shortcuts out of every 'difficult' situation/plot twist that (plot armourmaxxing) obviously will turn out advantageous to the FL but it doesn't even try to show some struggling or planning that it makes it look like generic story. imo its just lazy writing on the author's part that doesn't give the story justice which is a huge bummer cause it had a ready nice plot going ┑(￣Д ￣)┍ the art is pretty tho I like the character designs sm but I'm sad that they didn't give the characters much depth and instead made them look like shallow doting uncs/aunt.
Don’t get me wrong I like dem generic ass rofan stories where u can turn ur brain off while reading but this one is just so... meh. Wasted potential fr（￣へ￣）
had a **really nice premise** going.
I agree with @Night_NightSerenity it's basically unseasoned chicken lol