I hate it when authors do this. The scene where it said, I quote, "there are pervs outside they might peek inside, she has fan girls too her naked body will be too stimulating." she's a teenager my god. Why the hell did the author think it's a good idea to put in that line. Also, I don't understand the concept of how they're being ""fake"" for having a cool side or just being a normal person with emotions, I understand they're teens but I feel as though there could've been much more to this than just a "rude" attitude (which is not rude in the first place smh) she could've been a gray character with flaws but what she has aren't flaws at all they're normal emotions. The guy just looks cool I genuinely don't see what's so "dark side" abt it I don't know, this has so much potential but I can't get into it.
I hate it when authors do this. The scene where it said, I quote, "there are pervs outside they might peek inside, she has fan girls too her naked body will be too stimulating." she's a teenager my god. Why the hell did the author think it's a good idea to put in that line. Also, I don't understand the concept of how they're being ""fake"" for having a cool side or just being a normal person with emotions, I understand they're teens but I feel as though there could've been much more to this than just a "rude" attitude (which is not rude in the first place smh) she could've been a gray character with flaws but what she has aren't flaws at all they're normal emotions. The guy just looks cool I genuinely don't see what's so "dark side" abt it
I don't know, this has so much potential but I can't get into it.