The concept is CHEFS KISS MWAH MWAH MWHAHHHHH!!! But…why the age gap n rape..? The relationship didnt have time to naturally grow and if it did( without the rape) this wouldve been one of my FAVORITES. The characters were also cool af!!! cliff’s backstory was kinda mushed together like they wanted him to be mad religious but when you get failed by multiple religions ypu start distrusting religion not the other way around. I think maybe if they had him in it since he was a kid or yk his sister n parents died or he hot seperated from them, then he got into this religion. It wouldve been a lot more cohesive and would still be logical and build his character even more. I do like his tattos though ITS SOOOO FUCKING COOL!!!! I feel like maybe instead of different religions maybe just different people who he used to trust. Or maybe instead of him tattoing them just drawing them? Idkk but I REALLLY FUCKING LOVE THE TATSSSSS!!!! I really wanna rewrite this story cuz its SOOOOO GOOOD!!!!
The concept is CHEFS KISS MWAH MWAH MWHAHHHHH!!! But…why the age gap n rape..? The relationship didnt have time to naturally grow and if it did( without the rape) this wouldve been one of my FAVORITES. The characters were also cool af!!! cliff’s backstory was kinda mushed together like they wanted him to be mad religious but when you get failed by multiple religions ypu start distrusting religion not the other way around. I think maybe if they had him in it since he was a kid or yk his sister n parents died or he hot seperated from them, then he got into this religion. It wouldve been a lot more cohesive and would still be logical and build his character even more. I do like his tattos though ITS SOOOO FUCKING COOL!!!! I feel like maybe instead of different religions maybe just different people who he used to trust. Or maybe instead of him tattoing them just drawing them? Idkk but I REALLLY FUCKING LOVE THE TATSSSSS!!!! I really wanna rewrite this story cuz its SOOOOO GOOOD!!!!