So far everybody in this story is dumb. The smartest one is the kid. The pacing is iffy, but it's not terrible overall. There are missing pieces of information that we are just glossing right over. So the transitional moments are abysmal. And because there isn't much time spent on character development both characters are coming across as shallow. Especially the Alpha, who doesn't seem to have any actual reason as to why he hunted this dude down and is still interested in him even after being rejected, because they have not taken the time to focus on that. Like, "do you not have any other people that you've slept with?... It has to be this one?" Because they didn't do anything to make the omega special to the alpha other than the fact they've slept together before. Which kind of just begs the question, "is there nobody else? Why him?"
So far everybody in this story is dumb. The smartest one is the kid. The pacing is iffy, but it's not terrible overall. There are missing pieces of information that we are just glossing right over. So the transitional moments are abysmal. And because there isn't much time spent on character development both characters are coming across as shallow. Especially the Alpha, who doesn't seem to have any actual reason as to why he hunted this dude down and is still interested in him even after being rejected, because they have not taken the time to focus on that. Like, "do you not have any other people that you've slept with?... It has to be this one?" Because they didn't do anything to make the omega special to the alpha other than the fact they've slept together before. Which kind of just begs the question, "is there nobody else? Why him?"