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So far everybody in this story is dumb. The smartest one is the kid. The pacing is iffy, but it's not terrible overall. There are missing pieces of information that we are just glossing right over. So the transitional moments are abysmal. And because there isn't much time spent on character development both characters are coming across as shallow. Especially the Alpha, who doesn't seem to have any actual reason as to why he hunted this dude down and is still interested in him even after being rejected, because they have not taken the time to focus on that. Like, "do you not have any other people that you've slept with?... It has to be this one?" Because they didn't do anything to make the omega special to the alpha other than the fact they've slept together before. Which kind of just begs the question, "is there nobody else? Why him?"
I used to have this story in my "reading" this and it was lost in the great purge. I remember a lot about it but I can't remember the exact title. The guy's name is Ignus (or something) he is a prince I think. And she's the daughter of a swordmaster, who is sick and elderly. And she's genderbending as her brother who ran away to get married. She's a red-head. Actually more accomplished at the sword than her brother is. And there's the crazy hidden prince dude whose name escapes me, but he's obsessed with her. It's something like "The villain knows my identity" but I can't remember exactly what it's called.
The Villain Discovered My Identity
https://www.mangago.me/read-manga/the_villain_discovered_my_identity/
Thank you! ヾ(☆▽☆)
Are there any transmigration/time reversal isekais where the mc actually confesses that they're not the original to the love interest and it's not just glossed over? I feel like the only one I know of is Why Raeliana Ended Up at the Duke's Mansion. She spent a lot of time thinking on it and they worked afterwards towards the mystery together.
So, who is the male lead? Cause if it's Leviathan then I am not continuing this.
Really I just need confirmation that it's not him.
Definitely not leviathan. He has a wife and a son. He really take MC as his kid
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There are also some foreshadows that Rubi is Leviathan and his wife's presumably stillborn daughter
Thank you.