I'm only on chapter one and I feel like I just got thrown into this shit. Like I was straight isekai'd into this shit with no lube and no explanation like, "wtf is going on?" We went from "lovely picnic in the sun", to "finger my piss hole" in less than a chapter. (⊙…⊙ )
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It's got some problems, but overall I like it. I'm presently on chapter 40 and I think I have 2 main issues.
One - They're falling for each other real fast with so few conversations between them. And I know that might not be a huge issue for people. It's not a "make or break" issue for me either when I take in the context of their individual circumstances. "He's the only one who showed her kindness/didn't believe the rumors about her." And for him, he saw her past and can genuinely see that she's got more going on than just the rumors say. But those kinds of things also leave a lot up to speculation and lead to the creation of an idealised version of somebody if you don't ACTUALLY take the time to get to know them. Not to mention on her side he actually WASN'T the only one who showed her any kindness because she had a designated saviour. (And yes, I understand Raymond was actually an asshole and he wasn't really a saviour, but SHE didn't know that all the way up until he killed her.) Realistically it makes more sense for her to have fallen in love with Raymond.
This brings me to my second point in that it sort of seems made up as we go along at times. An example being that in an earlier chapter she's speculating about whether or not Corelia could have been working for somebody. And the way it's written makes it sound like she's coming to that conclusion for the first time, or that she came to that conclusion after a long time of thinking about it later. But in chapter 40 she implies that not only did she know about it, but Ferdin knew about it and had a fairly active investigation looking into it even if it didn't land him with any answers. This also shouldn't be a translation error either since I am reading the officials. There are more instances of tiny mismatches like this, but frankly I'm too lazy to go scouting for other problems and "why bother?"
Other than that my issues are fairly minor. Pacing is a bit off. And while I side-eye Charon not knowing, I'm willing to overlook it considering he was young and abuse victims frequently feel like they can't talk about it. That dad though? HEAVY SIDE-EYE. Ain't no way he hasn't seen his daughter being blamed for everything from a stained dress to fucking manslaughter and he's nowhere to be seen? The fuq. (╯°Д °)╯╧╧
I just finished the novel main story and am about to start the epilogue and side stories. I really don't think the manhwa is going to do it justice. It's a good story, with a lot of focus on how trauma has lingering effects. And while overall a lot of their problems stem from a lack of communication, it is still going to end up seeming very shallow in the manhwa as compared to the novel because a lot of it comes down to internal monologue. Gi-Hyeon spends a lot of time internalizing his issues but thinks them out very thoroughly, while Yeon-oh is more explosive and frequently acts on his temper first but reflects on it later. This also causes them to make assumptions and cause issues for the other in different ways. But since they don't take the time to have a conversation in order to deeply understand the other, fearing they'll get hurt worse, the misunderstandings just pile up and deepen.
https://novelight.net/book/salt-society
(Novel link for those interested)
Why y'all gotta post up 3 different versions of chapter 1 right off the bat? Go away. There's so many other stories left to be translated. Now we gonna have to wade through
chapter 1
01
chapter 1 (uncensored)
2
chapter 2 (uncensored)
Chapter 3
Chapter 2
3
Chapter 3
05
04
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
All these things getting posted out of order and having 3 different copies of it with 3 different translations is craziness and it's becoming too common.
Does anybody have any good novel links?
I've read up to chapter 50 in the novel but I'm looking for links past that.
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