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I really expected much because some comments said that worldbuilding is good but I'm on c...

Mango Juice August 27, 2026 2:35 am

I really expected much because some comments said that worldbuilding is good but I'm on chapter 5, and this story isn't that detailed. 1st the lack of people after the protagonist bumped into the Noble's servant when supposedly they're in the market then they fought in the said market and there's no commotion, and 2nd when they infiltrates the quinan they were talking to each other whilst they were supposed to be in the presence of the staffs of the place, 3rd they suddenly go into the carriage where people were kidnapped and the guy seems to know that it's a recurring event but there's no explanation or background whatsoever. Good worldbuilding my ass. The protagonist is also kinda dumb, because what do you mean she's in a place unknown to her then there's a person, a local willing to help her, given that she's wary of him but in that situation instead of trying to kill the person who saved her she should have calmed herself at least, step back a little and ask very important questions for her survival since the person is willing to provide answers. Her common sense is also all over the place.

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