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NGL, I'm not a fan of big conflict in these stories, because 9/10:
1. One of them crosses a line that becomes toxic and ruins the story.
2. It's resolved WAY too quickly and never brought up again.
But I do agree this is a taking a while. We're 52 chapters in, and they're still denying they care for each other beyond sex. This could be one of those weekly short stories at this rate.
52 chapters and 0 drama that isn’t just them yappin about who does or doesn’t want sex …. im growing impatient…. I yearn for larger conflicts… I need them to have a genuine reason to genuinely worry about the other…