I’m just begging this story to get plotting. You can’t introduce a tense scene in the prologue and still not have gotten to it by chapter 100!!! There’s been more than enough set up, I’m glad we did the time jump but I’m still bored by all this meandering.
I’m just begging this story to get plotting. You can’t introduce a tense scene in the prologue and still not have gotten to it by chapter 100!!! There’s been more than enough set up, I’m glad we did the time jump but I’m still bored by all this meandering.