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An FL that acts like a real person and doesn’t change her entirely personality on a dime so her second chance is an actual struggle and interesting plot…AND an ML who’s misunderstandings so far are rooted in complications beyond what a simple conversation can fix. Fingers crossed…it continues. And the art is beautiful too.
I’m just begging this story to get plotting. You can’t introduce a tense scene in the prologue and still not have gotten to it by chapter 100!!! There’s been more than enough set up, I’m glad we did the time jump but I’m still bored by all this meandering.