The start was so good and so much of the nobles story are wrapped up “off page” and just told to us by Ethan? Oh yeah, Vincent’s sight is back now, the evil brother went to jail and just doesn’t appear again…it’s so lazy. And I get the tension of Vincent not recognizing her at first but at this point why is being stretched and stretched. And she’s not mad?!?! I’d be mad. I am mad.
But I need the plot to start plotting. They introduced the Duke confronting the church at the very beginning and we STILL haven’t gotten that scene
No and it wont happen fast it'll be in tje last chapters of the ms.... We're at the end of the 1rst volume ( 70/76) 2nd volume will be 77 to 169 itll happen in the chapter 150 or little more.
Plot will begin soon 1rst with Noah plotting to be crown prince, then problems will appear that Esther will solve as the st then more.....









An FL that acts like a real person and doesn’t change her entirely personality on a dime so her second chance is an actual struggle and interesting plot…AND an ML who’s misunderstandings so far are rooted in complications beyond what a simple conversation can fix. Fingers crossed…it continues. And the art is beautiful too.