2.5/5 Stars — It got potential, but it lost it‘s momentum right from the start and didn’t pick it up; I feel the author had lots of ideas and threw them all in hazardously, but didn’t follow through or go into depth with any of them, so as a result the whole story feels somewhat shallow. As a PWP with a bit of emotion it‘s okay, otherwise it‘s (sadly) very forgettable.
Also wtf is with this crumbs of Shio being in love with this adoptive father — that came out of nowhere, was absolutely unnecessary for the "plot" and (thankfully!!) was dropped.
2.5/5 Stars — It got potential, but it lost it‘s momentum right from the start and didn’t pick it up; I feel the author had lots of ideas and threw them all in hazardously, but didn’t follow through or go into depth with any of them, so as a result the whole story feels somewhat shallow. As a PWP with a bit of emotion it‘s okay, otherwise it‘s (sadly) very forgettable.
Also wtf is with this crumbs of Shio being in love with this adoptive father — that came out of nowhere, was absolutely unnecessary for the "plot" and (thankfully!!) was dropped.