the pacing is a lil fast? idk it seems like conflict just disappears w the ml and he fell in love in 2 chps. like ooh beautiful face. and they get engaged in 20 chps. it makes me nervous for the next 50 like what could you possibly be writing abt
the pacing is a lil fast? idk it seems like conflict just disappears w the ml and he fell in love in 2 chps. like ooh beautiful face. and they get engaged in 20 chps. it makes me nervous for the next 50 like what could you possibly be writing abt