i mostly agree with you but i think the husband is shown being a gangster a bit more with coming home with blood and beating up his brother and being disrespectful to everyone but i agree its far too tame. i feel like the conflicts are nonexistent bc his alpha wolf male is here to protect him no matter what and no one can really be disrespectful to him even if they looked down on him for being an escort bc they literally got engaged in 20 chapters and the boss and the ml favors him. i wish they couldve done more with that conflict though like have some people talk shit abt him behind his back or smth. i think the high rating is because the couple is sweet and not everyone likes heavy conflict. sure it makes the story dry but we all have our preferences. its not compelling at all and theyre basically just fucking every chapter but its not horrible so i understand why people like it
oh i also think the doctor told them to have less sex not because of the hickeys but because theyre fucking chapter even though theyre limiting it to one round i think with his size its probably too much.
I think this should be the low 8.0s. it's not terrible, it's not really good either.
I am only 40 chapters in and I will finish this, but man is this rough.
What little bit of plot is set up either never happens or is full of holes.
Father set up to be the typical controlling rich father. Sits in the corner as a wordless forgotten about prop.
Gangster husband were introduced to passed out drunk and/or high on the couch in the middle of an orgy.
Never shows signs of being a gangster or bad at all ever again
Everyone looks down on MC for being an escort in the past?
ML tells a singular maid he was the one who gave the MC ramen 1 time and now MC is treated as a queen by everyone
MC is sensitive to pheromones and gets sick when he smells any but the ML's
Is immediately forgotten about after sexual harassment scene from one of ML's brothers
Doctor sees a bunch of hickeys on MC's body and demands they stop having sex (for literally no reason)
So MC goes to live with his grandma to stop the couple from jumping each other's bones..... Then proceeds to immediately state they they have sneaky sex behind his grandmother's back, so why even move out of you weren't going to listen to the doctor????
Any "plot" that should be tense and overarching is wrapped up so quickly that it just feels like a quick checkmark for a list and it all feels completely inconsequential. There really is no plot outside of the couple's personalities.
MC is pregnant and likes food (I don't think that's because they're pregnant)
ML doesn't act like a gangster, is p*say whipped and says absolutely nothing but perverted 1 liners. (The most interesting thing happening in this story)
About 34 chapters in the author wants to make us believe that the MC is so depressed that they want to die by the overly convenient plot device of sleep talking, but this hasn't been hinted at remotely ever before. Or really even afterwards. The MC should have some real depth to them but in practice actually just comes out as bland and flat as printer paper.
The REAL plot of this story is as follows:
-new location-
MC is sitting somewhere (always sitting)
MC wants or is eating food.
ML shows up with food.
ML says a few audacious perverted 1 liners
The pair bone
Repeat on endless loop to the point that the sex begins to feel like Naruto filler episodes.
The story is OK at best. It's not terrible, but it's barely decent and definitely not great or compelling. Art is good. Should not be almost 9.0
I may update after finishing if I feel like any of this changes.