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Overall

Nic August 31, 2026 3:41 pm

8.5/10
Confusing plot at the beginning
Mostly story
No baby :(
Buff bottom
Good story, a bit terrifying

Responses
    Humaru kabouto August 31, 2026 8:12 pm

    No baby :(

    Baras Son August 31, 2026 8:43 pm

    Yeah, the mystery aspect felt very poorly done--which is a shame because it had a lot of promise.

    Baras Son August 31, 2026 8:52 pm
    Yeah, the mystery aspect felt very poorly done--which is a shame because it had a lot of promise. Baras Son

    Should also note we have one more chapter.

    Yuu September 1, 2026 1:07 am

    The babies are in plant form … still count as mpreg. I bet they will take human form too if they already grown up

    Cam September 1, 2026 11:54 am

    Are we reading?? Bc it doesn’t seem like ittttt

    Nic September 20, 2026 4:40 am
    Are we reading?? Bc it doesn’t seem like ittttt Cam

    We are

    Nic September 20, 2026 4:41 am

    The beginning really gave me a stroke

    Cam September 20, 2026 4:45 am
    We are Nic

    Sure

    Nic September 20, 2026 4:50 am
    Sure Cam

    How did you handle the beginning I couldn't even grasp the plot

    Cam September 20, 2026 5:12 am
    How did you handle the beginning I couldn't even grasp the plot Nic

    LMAO I’m not gonna act like it wasn’t confusing, but at some point I was starting to understand.

    Chicklova October 28, 2026 11:47 am
    Are we reading?? Bc it doesn’t seem like ittttt Cam

    Genuinely what sparked this? This is a normal ass comment like genuinely what's your problem here??

    Cam October 28, 2026 1:57 pm
    Genuinely what sparked this? This is a normal ass comment like genuinely what's your problem here?? Chicklova

    I’m sorry, did I hurt your feelings too??

    Chicklova October 28, 2026 11:40 pm
    I’m sorry, did I hurt your feelings too?? Cam

    No, I'm seriously fucking confused. Are you a robot trying to sound human? What's going on in that noggin of yours for you to speak like this?

    Cam October 28, 2026 11:48 pm
    No, I'm seriously fucking confused. Are you a robot trying to sound human? What's going on in that noggin of yours for you to speak like this? Chicklova

    I don’t know who you’re talking to but it ain’t me, so I’ll let you keep that attitude to yourself and you can deal with why what I said offended your slow ass.

    Chicklova October 29, 2026 12:27 pm
    I don’t know who you’re talking to but it ain’t me, so I’ll let you keep that attitude to yourself and you can deal with why what I said offended your slow ass. Cam

    I am talking to you. Are you gonna use your words or can you not even understand your own actions?

    Nic October 29, 2026 1:35 pm

    Why are yall arguing omg