Read up to ch 79(included) and tbh so much plots were not concluded(maybe to concluded in another story). The roomate with white hair and kihoon, that was not concluded and to have Kihoon have feelings for the mc after that...It feels like he never gaf about the white hair guy, I mean in some ch the white hair guy says Im dating now and its implied to be kihoon, even tho they are not dating it seemed that the white hair guy would be forgiving him soon. But since kihoon got feelings for the mc in the mean time....Do you understand how it feels? Also, that whole plot is bad, why the hell would kihoon talk to the white hair guys parents or wtv to know abt the white hair guys mom and in a hotel?! Hes just a random guy! And no family would tell a random guy shit. And why doesnt kihoon just say "I wasnt fucking your sister, I had a meeting with blablabla" then relay the information he got and say sorry for dtepping out of bounds. THEY LIVE TOGETHER!! Plenty of time to talk, its a plot whole that they still didnt have that convo. Also kihoon is hotter the ml and less annoying. Another topic, the ml was too possessive and the story suffered from it ( I LOOOOVE POSSESSIVE MLS BTW). This stlry in specific suffered from it bc of the premise, a guy goes to live in a shared house after having a messy break up with his ex. The house if full of excentric characters and the guy has a jinx. The jinx and needing to fix with love?ok i get that. But it forgot one thing, excentric roomates! Normally in this stories, the mc is supposed to make close friendships with the roomates and grow with them. And the author wants us to think they are close but i barely saw interactions with them, the mc was just whinning and then some other things outside of the roomates happened. And the the mc going to live with the ml so soon... the ml living in the same house was also a bad choice. The villain was a bit of a real human and a bit cartonish evil. He was a real human in the sense that grew up priveliged and abused his power in a very violent way but then made no sense. The mc disappeared and went to the military, he didnt try and look for him after 2 years, someone tells you to go drink with the mc and he goes running (ok maybe its plausible). But then they try to frame his obsession and violence bc the mc never seemed like he loved him all that much, to his character it makes no sense. And tbh the villain is a bit dragged out, hes gonna do this, doesnt get what he wants, goes do that, doesnt get what he wants. Alzo if I were mcs brother i would be sooooo pissed!!!
Read up to ch 79(included) and tbh so much plots were not concluded(maybe to concluded in another story). The roomate with white hair and kihoon, that was not concluded and to have Kihoon have feelings for the mc after that...It feels like he never gaf about the white hair guy, I mean in some ch the white hair guy says Im dating now and its implied to be kihoon, even tho they are not dating it seemed that the white hair guy would be forgiving him soon. But since kihoon got feelings for the mc in the mean time....Do you understand how it feels? Also, that whole plot is bad, why the hell would kihoon talk to the white hair guys parents or wtv to know abt the white hair guys mom and in a hotel?! Hes just a random guy! And no family would tell a random guy shit. And why doesnt kihoon just say "I wasnt fucking your sister, I had a meeting with blablabla" then relay the information he got and say sorry for dtepping out of bounds. THEY LIVE TOGETHER!! Plenty of time to talk, its a plot whole that they still didnt have that convo. Also kihoon is hotter the ml and less annoying.
Another topic, the ml was too possessive and the story suffered from it ( I LOOOOVE POSSESSIVE MLS BTW). This stlry in specific suffered from it bc of the premise, a guy goes to live in a shared house after having a messy break up with his ex. The house if full of excentric characters and the guy has a jinx. The jinx and needing to fix with love?ok i get that. But it forgot one thing, excentric roomates! Normally in this stories, the mc is supposed to make close friendships with the roomates and grow with them. And the author wants us to think they are close but i barely saw interactions with them, the mc was just whinning and then some other things outside of the roomates happened. And the the mc going to live with the ml so soon... the ml living in the same house was also a bad choice.
The villain was a bit of a real human and a bit cartonish evil. He was a real human in the sense that grew up priveliged and abused his power in a very violent way but then made no sense. The mc disappeared and went to the military, he didnt try and look for him after 2 years, someone tells you to go drink with the mc and he goes running (ok maybe its plausible). But then they try to frame his obsession and violence bc the mc never seemed like he loved him all that much, to his character it makes no sense. And tbh the villain is a bit dragged out, hes gonna do this, doesnt get what he wants, goes do that, doesnt get what he wants.
Alzo if I were mcs brother i would be sooooo pissed!!!