There are a lot more that I wished this story had but for what is there, it's a good story. The ending was nice but felt cut short. The FL was actually a character and not a Mary sue or anything. The ML on the other hand couldve been a bit better but I liked him anyways. Overall a 8.9/10, don't think I'll revisit this because I'd just be dreaming of what could've been in the story but it was a nice read
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I really wished we got to see the reunion between Elise and Andrei, well at least it would've been a heartwarming scene anyways. Also wished we got a scene where MC created a tombstone for Genovia, poor girl died and was never brought up again. Same with Duke Bellator. Just a passing remark would've worked as well, "I paid my respect to Genovia and my godfather cause to them I own them my respects". We could've also gotten a bit more on Cemestia and Gallian's story, but thats just me cause I'm invested in their story. What we got in the story is more than enough and doesn't really overstep itself into making loose ends.
There are a lot more that I wished this story had but for what is there, it's a good story. The ending was nice but felt cut short. The FL was actually a character and not a Mary sue or anything. The ML on the other hand couldve been a bit better but I liked him anyways. Overall a 8.9/10, don't think I'll revisit this because I'd just be dreaming of what could've been in the story but it was a nice read
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I really wished we got to see the reunion between Elise and Andrei, well at least it would've been a heartwarming scene anyways.
Also wished we got a scene where MC created a tombstone for Genovia, poor girl died and was never brought up again. Same with Duke Bellator. Just a passing remark would've worked as well, "I paid my respect to Genovia and my godfather cause to them I own them my respects".
We could've also gotten a bit more on Cemestia and Gallian's story, but thats just me cause I'm invested in their story. What we got in the story is more than enough and doesn't really overstep itself into making loose ends.