Ughhhhhh this is so good ughhh. I literally love every character but especially MC family like even the older bro is so reasonable(and so fine). The fact that no one blames ML makes me so happy, it truly was never his fault. And i would even say rather than him causing these things to happen to his family, its better to say that bc he had an unfortunate birth, he was born into a family destined to die young even WITHOUT him. Like the misfortune of this family was predetermined, his misfortune was being born into it and having to experience it. If i was him, i would have gone insane. Im so happy MC is so kind to him and he is becoming happier.
Also i kinda ship big bro and childhood friend maybe a time skip romance? Especially with the backstory of MC family serving his, id love to read more Also childhood friend being just a really great friend is also so relieving(im so tired of love triangles).
Lastly this is the way to write long stories with many chapters and slow burn without using abuse and misunderstandings. You can write endless chapters about this type of subject matter, by elaborating on the association, the dad, the MC powers, the ML fate, the bro, the sis, MC taking on cases, ML exploring his powers and becoming an exorcist, and we havent even explored the underworld yet or the little spirits much tbh. So much to write about! I look forward to it.
Ughhhhhh this is so good ughhh. I literally love every character but especially MC family like even the older bro is so reasonable(and so fine). The fact that no one blames ML makes me so happy, it truly was never his fault. And i would even say rather than him causing these things to happen to his family, its better to say that bc he had an unfortunate birth, he was born into a family destined to die young even WITHOUT him. Like the misfortune of this family was predetermined, his misfortune was being born into it and having to experience it. If i was him, i would have gone insane. Im so happy MC is so kind to him and he is becoming happier.
Also i kinda ship big bro and childhood friend maybe a time skip romance? Especially with the backstory of MC family serving his, id love to read more Also childhood friend being just a really great friend is also so relieving(im so tired of love triangles).
Lastly this is the way to write long stories with many chapters and slow burn without using abuse and misunderstandings. You can write endless chapters about this type of subject matter, by elaborating on the association, the dad, the MC powers, the ML fate, the bro, the sis, MC taking on cases, ML exploring his powers and becoming an exorcist, and we havent even explored the underworld yet or the little spirits much tbh. So much to write about! I look forward to it.