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Well this could be misleading idm that the story is not good, but i would give it 9.0 at best
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Well this could be misleading idm that the story is not good, but i would give it 9.0 at best
This story honestly feels like a children’s bedtime story ╮(￣▽￣)╭ It lacks so much depth and emotional weight from the characters, especially the FL. Idk if it’s just me, but I feel like every plot point is just brushed off without much thought or proper development.
It’s like they took a 2,000 word description of what happened and compressed it into one panel. You can really see how many loopholes and missing details there are because of that.
But honestly, the biggest problem for me is the lack of emotional impact. Whether it’s her family relationships or her connection to the past and the things she already knows, none of it feels like it carries the weight it should. Everything happens, but it doesn’t really feel like anything.