beta
I dnt continue after i drop this story before and just went ahead to read the latest chapter.. i have a question does this mean the adoptive mother crime already been exposed? And is she already dead? Because she is the sole reason i hate this story （￣へ￣）ik it does not justify the seme crime (kidnapping etc) but i cant hate him that much.
her crime has been exposed, but she managed to get away and she is on the run so she is alive
This story honestly feels like a children’s bedtime story ╮(￣▽￣)╭ It lacks so much depth and emotional weight from the characters, especially the FL. Idk if it’s just me, but I feel like every plot point is just brushed off without much thought or proper development.
It’s like they took a 2,000 word description of what happened and compressed it into one panel. You can really see how many loopholes and missing details there are because of that.
But honestly, the biggest problem for me is the lack of emotional impact. Whether it’s her family relationships or her connection to the past and the things she already knows, none of it feels like it carries the weight it should. Everything happens, but it doesn’t really feel like anything.
Well this could be misleading idm that the story is not good, but i would give it 9.0 at best