Despite the intention of making this project short, I find the pacing of it kinda bad. The art style is super cool (despite some character designs PERSONALLY not being as eye catching to) however, I see the structure of the story consist of 15% story, 80% smut, 5% story all squished in order which made me forget that sometimes certain things like SPOILERRRSSS
The fact that pre-reincarnated Nox used to bully Yuri or the fact that Nox’s mother (not the count) was still part of the picture. I PERSONALLY think that the story could’ve been structured better and be sprinkled around in between other chapters rather than concentrating it all around the start and the end. I really liked the way they would reveal some of Derrick’s family lore though as well as the struggles that the characters faced and the way they overcame it. Overall in MY OPINION, I see this BL as just a story full of smut. Let me know what you guys think of it! ☆~٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶
Despite the intention of making this project short, I find the pacing of it kinda bad. The art style is super cool (despite some character designs PERSONALLY not being as eye catching to) however, I see the structure of the story consist of 15% story, 80% smut, 5% story all squished in order which made me forget that sometimes certain things like SPOILERRRSSS
The fact that pre-reincarnated Nox used to bully Yuri or the fact that Nox’s mother (not the count) was still part of the picture. I PERSONALLY think that the story could’ve been structured better and be sprinkled around in between other chapters rather than concentrating it all around the start and the end. I really liked the way they would reveal some of Derrick’s family lore though as well as the struggles that the characters faced and the way they overcame it.
Overall in MY OPINION, I see this BL as just a story full of smut. Let me know what you guys think of it! ☆~٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶