I think this story could be good, but I think what's holding it back are the fight scenes. It's taking too long and the plot isn't even progressing, it just keeps repeating over and over again. The planet creates monsters to protect itself, the beings living in the planet fights back then fights each other.. It's exhausting. It never ends. Plus, the fight scenes have waaaay too much unnecessary dialogues, it looks like the fights doesn't even have purpose (idk if that makes sense)
I think this story could be good, but I think what's holding it back are the fight scenes. It's taking too long and the plot isn't even progressing, it just keeps repeating over and over again. The planet creates monsters to protect itself, the beings living in the planet fights back then fights each other.. It's exhausting. It never ends. Plus, the fight scenes have waaaay too much unnecessary dialogues, it looks like the fights doesn't even have purpose (idk if that makes sense)