barebones abo plot

im sorry but i feel like some authors make abo stories thinking it's a guaranteed hit and then make the most barebones/disengaging story. you can't just make an abo story and think it's auto good because it's abo. a lot of premises for abo are similar but it's the characters + the way they're written that makes them so fun/interesting to read.

guys that was the most predictable thing to happen ever. like the villain was obvious right from the get go everything in this manga is kind of just forced to click together but the pieces arent clicking because none of the parts are either written well or explored enough. the dark, tragic parts of this story aren't written well either so it just comes across as either shocking, or everyone reinforcing the idea that omegas are inferior, which we already know because that is the point of the premise it's literally to explore that + the challenges that come w this hierarchy.

mc isn't likeable even with his backstory because his actions still don't make sense considering his occupation. what it did make sense of was his need to prove himself (but then it would've made MORE sense that he reported about the drug) and his confusion about + aversion to his feelings for leo (this actually makes sense).

if leo is supposed to be considerate and secretly supportive of mc as an alpha, how would it make sense that when mc is spiralling about how dirty he is, leo goes the time is now lemme take you. instead of comforting him in literally any other way...? like nothing is consistent. there are better abos to read.

sorry im actually just passionate about abo