This has so much potential but has so many loop holes. I get it she's not favored but did she not receive any kind of education for her to act so ignorant? Yes her grandmother hates her and there's a prophecy but she still has her dad, how come she's not well educated and no one's helped with her stutter? I just can't wrap my brain around her being so innocent.
She seems like a young kid at first but then became a teen ager? the age is not clear at all. There were also add ons like the scene with the elder and "asha's" dad being acquaintance? things were added for the sake of convenience.
props to the art tho and hope this will get better
This has so much potential but has so many loop holes. I get it she's not favored but did she not receive any kind of education for her to act so ignorant? Yes her grandmother hates her and there's a prophecy but she still has her dad, how come she's not well educated and no one's helped with her stutter? I just can't wrap my brain around her being so innocent.
She seems like a young kid at first but then became a teen ager? the age is not clear at all. There were also add ons like the scene with the elder and "asha's" dad being acquaintance? things were added for the sake of convenience.
props to the art tho and hope this will get better