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Yea I think the flow is kinda weird, like in the latest chapter it just jumped from MC being with ML to him talking with his lil bro out of nowhere. Doesn’t seem like much exposition/transitions in between
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Yea I think the flow is kinda weird, like in the latest chapter it just jumped from MC being with ML to him talking with his lil bro out of nowhere. Doesn’t seem like much exposition/transitions in between
im enjoying the story and i love the art, but i really gotta say - there's something disjointed about the story that hinders the flow... maybe it's the humor, or the way i sometimes don't understand the characters' actions lol it's interesting