well this was a bit of a bizarre reading experience; almost like an unorthodox narrative design mixed with underdeveloped, strange and vaguely connected, perhaps even reworked mid-publish plot(s) -- there were a few instances of dialogue/situations being repeated but with additional or completely different scenes. i also think, regardless of being an apparent official translation, numerous places read awkwardly, or even completely omitted context that was then addressed as if already brought up midway through interaction/conversation yet clearly wasn't. of course part of that might be a byproduct of my prior thoughts regarding the way the narrative was presented.
oddly enough, however, despite the plotline(s) that never felt really 'introduced' nor completely resolved (though wasn't uninteresting and could have worked well as such if given more time to develop alongside the couple plot), the pair itself was enjoyable, had good chemistry, and were just cute overall. it very much had a feel of 'this is about the couple; other stuff is going on but not important, cause couple'. i don't have any issue with those, but the seeming (purposefully vague?) external events weren't implemented very well just within themselves, not only in how it was integrated with the 'main storyline(?)' of the couple.
i don't know; who does? in the end, there was a lot of cuteness there nonetheless ╮(￣▽￣)╭
well this was a bit of a bizarre reading experience; almost like an unorthodox narrative design mixed with underdeveloped, strange and vaguely connected, perhaps even reworked mid-publish plot(s) -- there were a few instances of dialogue/situations being repeated but with additional or completely different scenes. i also think, regardless of being an apparent official translation, numerous places read awkwardly, or even completely omitted context that was then addressed as if already brought up midway through interaction/conversation yet clearly wasn't. of course part of that might be a byproduct of my prior thoughts regarding the way the narrative was presented.
oddly enough, however, despite the plotline(s) that never felt really 'introduced' nor completely resolved (though wasn't uninteresting and could have worked well as such if given more time to develop alongside the couple plot), the pair itself was enjoyable, had good chemistry, and were just cute overall. it very much had a feel of 'this is about the couple; other stuff is going on but not important, cause couple'. i don't have any issue with those, but the seeming (purposefully vague?) external events weren't implemented very well just within themselves, not only in how it was integrated with the 'main storyline(?)' of the couple.
i don't know; who does? in the end, there was a lot of cuteness there nonetheless ╮(￣▽￣)╭