I know it’s short, so it was obvious it was gonna fall as short on something, but sometimes I really wonder if we’re just reading the same story over and over again just by different authors… It’s not bad (personally I’m not a fan of the “losing control” kinda sex and the monstrous builds of the characters’ bodies) but still… maybe I’m just tired of stories where the time characters spend with each other is so obviously just (haha) a mean to get to the sex bit. Also, short or not, it has a few kind of like plotholes, or things that just felt useless in the “long” run? Such as the lesson on traits, like, Taegyul (I’m not sure about the name srry) was sleeping like a log during that bit, so I suppose it was just a way to explain the whole thing to us readers, and I know some people might not know about omegaverse, but it felt, as I said, useless, or at least a missed chance to get Taegyul into the topic, so that later on he could make connections in his head (like when that dude stopped them) etc. Idk, again, short or not, I expected more of this author since their other work it’s really good. Like, what’s the point of writing about something you never wrote about, just for it to be like the average thing, without actually putting some sort of spin to it? Of course, they can do whatever they like however they want, it’s their work not mine, and it’s not like my word is the gospel or smth, I just felt like getting this out there more as a general consideration (I hope this makes sense, to me it does for now but since english is not my first language and I wrote this in one go I worry I didn’t make myself clear ~////~)
I know it’s short, so it was obvious it was gonna fall as short on something, but sometimes I really wonder if we’re just reading the same story over and over again just by different authors… It’s not bad (personally I’m not a fan of the “losing control” kinda sex and the monstrous builds of the characters’ bodies) but still… maybe I’m just tired of stories where the time characters spend with each other is so obviously just (haha) a mean to get to the sex bit. Also, short or not, it has a few kind of like plotholes, or things that just felt useless in the “long” run? Such as the lesson on traits, like, Taegyul (I’m not sure about the name srry) was sleeping like a log during that bit, so I suppose it was just a way to explain the whole thing to us readers, and I know some people might not know about omegaverse, but it felt, as I said, useless, or at least a missed chance to get Taegyul into the topic, so that later on he could make connections in his head (like when that dude stopped them) etc. Idk, again, short or not, I expected more of this author since their other work it’s really good. Like, what’s the point of writing about something you never wrote about, just for it to be like the average thing, without actually putting some sort of spin to it? Of course, they can do whatever they like however they want, it’s their work not mine, and it’s not like my word is the gospel or smth, I just felt like getting this out there more as a general consideration (I hope this makes sense, to me it does for now but since english is not my first language and I wrote this in one go I worry I didn’t make myself clear ~////~)