the dialogue is stale and shallower than a lagoon and a piece of bread thats been left out on the cold dark dusty ass flor for 20years. everything is so robotic that i had to force my eyes wide open to get through it but even after ending ch.15 makes me want to convulse, is it the translation or the actual story, i’ll never know. one things for sure the exponential progress of this mess of an introduction to a plot and his skills that is just basically spamming them and no creative way or slight struggle to even gain xp or anything for that matter. and i swear every chars have an iq of less than one braincell when it comes to concluding that he is strong like everyone needs a ct scan and an eye check cause aint no way yall that far down in denial. ik this is obviously op mcslop which i love the genre but this aint cutting, i thought it’d be fine but genuinely this lowk not worth the read unless someone convinces me otherwise, i’ll still probs read it when im bored and just want to look and not really delve into the story to pass the time.
the dialogue is stale and shallower than a lagoon and a piece of bread thats been left out on the cold dark dusty ass flor for 20years.
everything is so robotic that i had to force my eyes wide open to get through it but even after ending ch.15 makes me want to convulse, is it the translation or the actual story, i’ll never know.
one things for sure the exponential progress of this mess of an introduction to a plot and his skills that is just basically spamming them and no creative way or slight struggle to even gain xp or anything for that matter.
and i swear every chars have an iq of less than one braincell when it comes to concluding that he is strong like everyone needs a ct scan and an eye check cause aint no way yall that far down in denial.
ik this is obviously op mcslop which i love the genre but this aint cutting, i thought it’d be fine but genuinely this lowk not worth the read unless someone convinces me otherwise, i’ll still probs read it when im bored and just want to look and not really delve into the story to pass the time.