Saw this as a recommended read, so I came into this prepared for wild action, romance, and extreme play, and all I got was disappointment. All I could feel was pity for the ML.
The action was lackluster; the MC was awful to the ML straight from the start. He held information back for no reason, and instead of telling the ML, he let the poor guy fester and stew with anxiety. And though the ML's affection for the MC was so blatantly clear, he trampled all over that, and still chalked it up to them being f-buddies.
The grey-haired guy had NO purpose other than being a sucky antagonist.
And then the ending. O.M.F.G!!! IT MADE ME SO MAD! After all that, he had the gal to say "I love you"?????? ARE YOU KIDDING ME!!!! After hurting the ML like that! They should've stayed broken up. The only positive thing I can say is the art. Art wasted on a non-fleshed-out story.
Saw this as a recommended read, so I came into this prepared for wild action, romance, and extreme play, and all I got was disappointment. All I could feel was pity for the ML.
The action was lackluster; the MC was awful to the ML straight from the start. He held information back for no reason, and instead of telling the ML, he let the poor guy fester and stew with anxiety. And though the ML's affection for the MC was so blatantly clear, he trampled all over that, and still chalked it up to them being f-buddies.
The grey-haired guy had NO purpose other than being a sucky antagonist.
And then the ending. O.M.F.G!!! IT MADE ME SO MAD! After all that, he had the gal to say "I love you"?????? ARE YOU KIDDING ME!!!! After hurting the ML like that! They should've stayed broken up. The only positive thing I can say is the art. Art wasted on a non-fleshed-out story.