Overall a good concept, but the writing feels really immature… the plot is so contrived and at times illogical, making much of the characters’ actions feel inconsequential. The characters themselves felt flat and unrealistic, so the emotional scenes just came off as cringe melodrama. I love revenge stories but this wasn’t it
Overall a good concept, but the writing feels really immature… the plot is so contrived and at times illogical, making much of the characters’ actions feel inconsequential. The characters themselves felt flat and unrealistic, so the emotional scenes just came off as cringe melodrama. I love revenge stories but this wasn’t it