Not everyone enjoys the same "goon material". If one enjoys good romance with lots of smut and smut with fun plot and development, one can be disappointed when that is not met.
I like the magic and drawing style. I thought there might be some interesting dynamics to be seen... I'm feeling very upset about things after they split... and I feel like her character is getting diluted.
It sucks when you start a read that got you feeling and thinking, but then it upsets you in the not fun way.

To the ppl here hating this what'd you expect lmao? If it's goon material it's goon material don't expect "good romance" or whatnot