There isn't much to say, it's pretty solid and cute at the end, I just have a couple of peeves. If Rui always likes Shion ever since before he turned into a woman, why does he continue to have one night stands with other women? Wouldn't it be technically cheating on his feelings? I feel like this was never addressed
Also, the age diff between Hajime and Hodaka gave me a little bit of the icks. We know that Hajime is the friend of his father's (iirc) and we saw a panel of younger Rui and Hajime playing chess, it looks like quite a big age diff (at the very least by 7 years). Since Hodaka and Rui are both Uni students, so around the same age, doesn't that make the situationship a little inappropriate?
Also also, Shion, Rui, Hodaka and Hajime are now all criminals. Hodaka for attempted SA, kidnapping and drugging, Hajime for human experiments and illegal production/distribution of unlicensed drugs. Rui and Shion both for drugging and essentially kidnapping Hodaka - which they didn't report to the police for.
These are just nitpicks of mine, it's just a doujin made for gooning. It's pretty good in terms of storyline and character development
There isn't much to say, it's pretty solid and cute at the end, I just have a couple of peeves. If Rui always likes Shion ever since before he turned into a woman, why does he continue to have one night stands with other women? Wouldn't it be technically cheating on his feelings? I feel like this was never addressed
Also, the age diff between Hajime and Hodaka gave me a little bit of the icks. We know that Hajime is the friend of his father's (iirc) and we saw a panel of younger Rui and Hajime playing chess, it looks like quite a big age diff (at the very least by 7 years). Since Hodaka and Rui are both Uni students, so around the same age, doesn't that make the situationship a little inappropriate?
Also also, Shion, Rui, Hodaka and Hajime are now all criminals. Hodaka for attempted SA, kidnapping and drugging, Hajime for human experiments and illegal production/distribution of unlicensed drugs. Rui and Shion both for drugging and essentially kidnapping Hodaka - which they didn't report to the police for.
These are just nitpicks of mine, it's just a doujin made for gooning. It's pretty good in terms of storyline and character development